Thursday, May 17, 2012

5/17

Today was all about looking for typos in the essay. Please see the editor's checklist below that we used in class today.  We did move to a new paper each section but if you missed today you could ask someone to read it through looking for all elements or several looking for each.  HW is to edit your paper and be ready to turn in ALL pieces on Monday (see question sheet for checklist) and read in WWII books logs due Monday.  I am out tomorrow so please have your IR books as you will be completing 30 minutes of reading and a long-write in class tomorrow for a grade!


EDITOR’S CHECKLIST
1. Logistics
o   Heading
o   Double space
o   Cinderella Man directed by Ron Howard


2.  Spelling and Capitalization of Names
o   James J. Braddock
o   Mae Braddock
o   Mike and Sara Wilson
o   Joe Gould (agent and friend)
o   Johnston (promoter, made Jimmy watch fight)
o   Max Baer
o   Other general spelling errors
3.  Second person and paragraphs
o   Avoid YOU
o   Paragraphs—is it broken up into paragraphs?

4.  Confused words
o   There/their
o   It’s/its
o   Where/were
o   Then/than
o   Woman/women
5.  Run-on sentences
o   Three ways to fix a run on sentence:
1.    Add a period and capitalize next word
2.    Use a comma conjunction  (, and)
3.    Use a semi colon
6.  Tense:
o   When referring to scenes in the movie stay in the literary present
o   For example
§  This is clearly reflected in the movie when Braddock… instead of
This was in the movie…
§  The movie is about a man ….
instead of
The movie was about a man….